Wednesday, August 30, 2006

Save Me

Just wish we finished composing the tune for this, Arvind. We could have finally played an original, and I could have sung a song I wrote...

I lie alone in this room.
I cower from the shadows that move,
within my head.
I feel strange.
I feel so cold that I feel numb,
yet I feel fear.

Breathe life into me,
I'm crumbling.
Breathe some life into me,
I'm dying.

Mottled things in my soul.
Rotting inside I'm losing it all,
clinging to the rust
Naked within winter's heart
The frost spreads through my veins,
heads for my heart.

And then I see you open the door,
I see your face as your eyes seek me,
and I feel hope. No more alone...
Breathe some life into me,
I'm crumbling.
Breathe some life into me,
I'm dying.
Because once I fade into the dust,
your tears won't bring me back.
Save me now.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Good work! I liked the chorus, "I'm dying..." How come it's about a woman again?

Keep it going.

Laxmi said...

this one is just truly amazing...! i'd love to hear you sing it..seriously!...n that girl is one lucky person!

Anonymous said...

This guy is amazing!!
The song seriously rocks...especially the chorous..the ending is very fitting...would come out awsome if it is sung!!

Anonymous said...

gr8 work..if u keep this up i thnk i might jst hav one helluva lyricist on hand;)

Anonymous said...

WOW!....awesome stuff!...I don't think i need to add nething more ... keep up the good work...